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GIANT INPROVEMENT GrImDaRk ANIMATION by AbsoluteHikikomori GIANT INPROVEMENT GrImDaRk ANIMATION by AbsoluteHikikomori
h hi emily,will and aislinn
what did i do to my self
oh nothing just gained more PoWeR
i didnt want anyone to die and ThEy offerd me more Strength
how could i not take it
but
but no im not crazy
wait where are you guys go...
WhY DoSe It HuRT So MuCh

*this was after a huge imp slaughter*

this was just a random line i thought up

we all met up to fight the boss
after my dad was killed in the process i went nuts and grimdark and slaughtered imps left and right
andthen i met up with my session players and they went to fight the boss
but i took it difrently apparently and then took it out on the boss and shit like that

ANY WAY OMG HUGE IMPROVEMENT FROM THE LAST ONE RIGHT
well my freind will gave me a critiqe and at first i thought it was bad
and then i realized how much improvement i could do
THIS TOOK ME 3 HOURS of practice AND WORK

so hard
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wow hot ok
just like
tentecles everwhere its a god damn anime all up in here
ahahha just kidding
anyway
hot shoes
i think the tentecles broke ur neck omf
gOOD LEG PERSPECTIVE IM TERRIBLE WITH MINE
anyway
hand perspective slightly off
slENDER SYMBOL
yeah alright thats all i gotta say
ok bye <>
oh wait theres a word amount aurgh alright i gotta do this
so how about that game last night
did you here
alright im just going to put random words now
ascend
descend
rise up
abscond
end
the
world
roll
shit
puppies
hIM
doot
trumpet
primal
espeon
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First of all much better than the first ;D
There are much more pros than cons in this. I guess ill start with pros.
Well begin with the head not much is wrong i understand that you said you screwed up and you tried to make it as normal as possible but honestly it doesnt really look screwed up at all ;D. quick question though were are your glasses xD your expression is pretty good tooooo. you have a smile yet you are crying... i think. this makes it look like you are angry sad or even crazy which means that lots of people who dont understand grimdark will like. I cant find any real important areas to improve on the head so ill move on to the torso and arms. First off the porportions of the torso are perfect they are much better than last time! the only problem i have and it isnt to much of a problem is your arms, you arent that beefy bro XD! your hands are pretty good as far as shape and directiong goes id reccomend toning down your arms and hands size in the future! but honestly that is the oly problem i have with the torso. Well go to your weapon. i havent heard about this one from you so correct me if im wrong but is it supposed to be curving? i think it still looks cool though. Your lower torso and legs are fine. The shoes are awesome again im happy that they dont look like giant blobs like mine do XD !
And the black grim dark junk that looks just amazing and super proffessional im impressed by it really by it!
overall i only counted maybe 1... 2 MINOR flaws? when last time i found what 7? Yes huge improvement.
Overall excellent peice much better than the original cant wait for your next piece!
- Will
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sleepingisboring Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
woa sweg
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AbsoluteHikikomori Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omgthisisleik2yearsold
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sleepingisboring Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
but iz nice
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Dankuro Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
...lets just say im happy im your friend and not your enemy...damn
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AbsoluteHikikomori Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Muhahahahahahahaha
GoOd ThInG tO
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Dankuro Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Dont think it intimidates me tho! Heehee~
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AbsoluteHikikomori Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course not the slender family is never intimidated CB<
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SeerOfBlood Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I seen enough hentai
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AbsoluteHikikomori Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
woah
woah
woah
woah
didnt see that one comeing
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SeerOfBlood Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
To know where this is going
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